by William J. Petersen
When I was 20 years old, I decided to give freelance writing a try. Why not? I had been reading Sunday school literature since I was six years old, and I understood that editors were crying out for children’s stories.
So I hastily compiled a list of six Sunday school papers aimed at kids 9 to 12 years old. Then I went to my typewriter (computers hadn’t been invented yet) and pounded out a story about a wanna-be baseball player named Herbie, who was afraid of getting hit by a baseball every time he came up to bat.
The story ended with Herbie coming up to bat in the last inning with the bases loaded. He got hit by a pitch to force in the winning run.
I decided to send the story to Scripture Press, because my church used Scripture Press materials. It was returned to me—rejected—within a week. I was disappointed, of course, and I thought the editor was stupid for turning down such a classic story for junior aged boys, but I had five other Sunday school papers on my list. If Scripture Press decided to turn down a classic, I would send it to one of their competitors!
I got my second rejection within a week, from the Free Methodists in Winona Lake, Indiana. So I sent my masterpiece to the Assemblies of God in Springfield, Missouri—another rejection—and then on to the Nazarenes in Kansas City, and then to David C. Cook, at that time in Elgin, Illinois, and finally to a Baptist publisher.
Within six weeks, believe it or not, I had collected six rejection slips.
I was discouraged, yes, but I wasn’t quitting, though I had reached the end of my list. I thought of trying a few more denominational houses, but since I had written Herbie specifically for the Scripture Press publication called My Counselor, I decided to give them a chance to redeem themselves. Maybe the editor had a quarrel with the boss the first time. Or maybe he had an upset stomach, or maybe . . .
Well, within another ten days I received a letter from the editor of My Counselor. When I saw the envelope, I was sure it was another rejection.
I was wrong.
The editors had accepted “Herbie, the Ball-shy Wildcat” for publication. It appeared in print the following year. And amazingly, every three years during the next dozen years, the publication reprinted Herbie, and of course each time they sent me a little check as well ($15 for the first publication and $10 for each reprint).
Word of Wisdom Number One: It’s always too soon to quit.
Years later, when I was editorial director of a book publisher, a very discouraged lawyer and wannabe novelist submitted a manuscript that had been rejected 27 times. We accepted it and A Time to Kill became a bestseller. Its author, John Grisham, became one of the best-known novelists of the past 50 years.
It’s always too soon to quit.
I’m not especially gifted in any particular area of writing. The flip-side of that is, I never knew what I couldn’t do until I tried. So I have tried a lot of different things: Gospel tracts, movie scripts, TV commercials, missionary biographies, Bible study curricula, quizzes, fiction, personality sketches, how-to’s, poetry, interviews, radio writing, daily devotionals, fund-raising letters, humor, writing for kids, you name it.
I am no Bible scholar, but I have written some very successful books on the lives of biblical characters, as well as curriculum for adult Bible study classes.
By trial and error I’ve learned that, despite my success with “Herbie,” I don’t do fiction very well. But I’ve been trying to learn that craft, and managed to self-publish several unpublishable novels in my eighties.
While serving as a mentor for the Christian Writers Guild, I introduced students to all genres of writing. One writer was especially interested in fiction, but she had to go through the lessons on writing newspaper articles, how-to articles, devotionals and all kinds of things. She finally got the chance to develop her novel, but by then she’d had two non-fiction articles accepted by national publications and one magazine had invited her to do a regular column.
So you never know what doors the Lord might open for you.
Word of Wisdom Number Two: Take some risks. Branch out into new areas. Go outside your comfort zone. Don’t limit yourself to one writing genre.
I’ll never forget Miss Fackler. She was my freshman writing teacher in college, and I was scared to death of her. No frog had ever been dissected the way she cut apart my writing.
Oh, I had been accustomed to seeing red marks on my papers, showing me where I had misspelled a word or used the wrong punctuation. But she asked questions: Why did you say this? Is that the best word to use? Do you really need that paragraph? Can’t you say this in fewer words?
I dreaded her favorite expression: Superfluous.
But before long, I was asking some of those questions myself before I turned in my paper. In the process, I learned the importance of self-editing.
Now writing and editing are two different skills. I doubt if Miss Fackler ever had anything published, but in her role as teacher, she was a fine editor. And she taught me both skills.
You will be a better writer if you learn to edit your own work effectively.
Don’t edit as you write. Get your first draft down on paper or on the computer, and then you can edit.
Sometimes it helps to wait a few days before editing. Then, does it still make sense? Can you outline it now? One of the first things I do in self-editing is to look at the verbs and eliminate all the forms of “to be” that I can, replacing those dead verbs with action verbs. Then I look at sentences beginning with “There” and “It.”
Then I look at word-length, sentence length, paragraph length. I look at “ly” adverbs, impersonal pronouns. Use Anglo-Saxon words, not Latin compounds, wherever possible.
These cautions might paralyze you during the writing process. Write freely. But then go back later and prune your work to make it stronger.
Word of Wisdom Number three: Learn to be self-critical, to be your own editor. When you write, be warmly involved in your story. When you edit, be coolly detached.
William J. Petersen, father of CFWN editor Randy Petersen, passed away in January, 2021, at the age of 91. An editor at Eternity Magazine for thirty years, he also authored more than twenty books. These were notes for a talk at a writer’s conference a few years ago.